So I'm doing another read though since I'm at Act 2B. And it's a good thing I do them because I discovered a continuity error. Apparently I have two characters that have this ability to teleport and swap locations with one another? This only requires tweaking in one scene to fix it though, thankfully. But it was hilarious none the less, because I record myself reading, and you hear me go into this... dot dot dot... state. Totally crack up. Gonna keep on reading and then fix that. Andddddddddddd done. Read through came out to 57 minutes in total. Fixed the teleporting problem by changing a bit of dialog. Luckily for Edan, it meant he got a compliment! Aww, lucky him! But it's short-lived though of course. Heh, typical Galen.
-Icey
Mountains of Parchment
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